2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；简单句稍微有点多，可适当增加从句使用；作者能较准确地使用丰富的词汇，但请认真检查词汇的拼写。

As know as well everybody wants to be successful, which will make us to get something that we could easy get it. However, it is not that everybody will succeed. We have to learn more knowledge and more striving than other peeple if we want to be successful. There are someone in favor of my point because they already got it. Meanwhile, there also are other people think my view that is wrong so we don't have to do. No matter how you choose way, you would experience more thing and get more feeling which you are never experience. In my opioin, we should choose the right method which could help us reduce more time, also, we should do much work for it. Only do it you will beyond other people so that you maybe achive you dream. In a word, we have to choose right method and do much work for it.