2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；可适当增加文中长句和复杂句的使用；文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用高级词汇就更好了。

As known as well everybody wants to be successful, which will make us get something that we could easy get it. However, it is not that everybody will succeed. We have to enrich our knowledge and more striving than other people if we want to be successful. There is someone in favor of my point because they already got it. Meanwhile, also there are other people thought my view that is wrong so we don't have to do. No matter how you choose the way, you would experience more thing and get more feeling which you are never feeling. In my opinion, we should choose the right method which could help us reduce more time, also, we should do much work for it. Only do you will surpass other people so that you could achieve your dream. In a word, we have to choose a right method and do much work for it.