2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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With the development of high technology, computer has became more and more popular in the society. It plays a significant role in our daily life. First of all,it made our life more convenient. People can search for any imformation without leaving home. Secondly,they are able to chat with their friends or relatives coming from all over the country.What's more,playing or purchasing online when they are free.Nevertheless,computer also lead to some troubles. Lots of children are addicted to computer games seriousely.They spent much time on playing games.As a result,their study fell behind heavily.Moreover,some people on the Internet will commit a crime with misconduct. As far as I'm concerned,just like a proverb says,"every coin has two sides".I suppose that something should be taken.The parents must lay out some rules with chilldren.Also ,teaching them some common sense about how to use computer properly.Only in this way can we get more benefits from it.