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文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用高级词汇就更好了；恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意极个别句子错误。
In China, there are many wonderful landscapes which are worth visiting, such as my hometown——Guangzhou. If my foreign friend is going to visit my hometown, I would arrange a best trip to her. First of all, I would take her to Guangzhou Tower. It has built for several years and is one of the tallest tower in the world. You can enjoy the beautiful view and feel you are in the sky. Secondly, Beijing Road is absolutely worth visiting. Not only does it contain a large amount of historical background but also it is a shopping center to buy everything you want. Thirdly, I would take her to a exciting place called Changlong Amusement Park. It is full of scream and shout, so you can release you stress inside. I hope my friend would remember this trip forever.
