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In China, there are many wonderful landscapes which are worth visiting, such as my hometown——Guangzhou. If my foreign friend is going to visit my hometown, I would arrange a good trip to her. First of all, I would take her to Guangzhou Tower. It has built for several years and is one of the tallest towers in the world. She can enjoy the beautiful view and feel herself in the sky. Secondly, Beijing Road is absolutely worth visiting. Not only does it contain a large amount of historical background but also it is a shopping center to buy everything she wants. Thirdly, I would take her to an exciting place called Changlong Amusement Park. It is full of scream and shout, so she can release you stress inside. I hope my friend would remember this trip forever.
