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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8979[网页划词已开启]
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For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

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文章衔接手法恰当;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用;作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练,单词拼写方面要更仔细。

用户练习作文:

More and more people chose to do the plastic surgery shows that the apperande seems becone more and more important. There is no doubt that a good looking will bring more chance in finding a job or developing the society relationships but that not means that the appearance means everthing. So it is unwise to judge a person by their appearance. First of all, apperance can not refect the ability. Mayun, the founder and executive chairman of alibaba group, a family of successful internet-based businesses. He is the first mainland chinese entrepreneur to appear on the cover of forbes. In 2014, he was ranked as the 30th most powerful person in the world in an annual ranking published by forbes. In 2015 he was honoured with the entrepreneur of the year award at he asian awards. However, as we all know, Mayun has not a good looking. The person looks like the ordinary has teh chance to make a big success. On the contrary, the good looking person may is not behaviour good. We can not figure out the character, ability, strengthes or shortcomings. So be remember that do not judge a person by their apperance.

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