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有效地采用了多种衔接方法，层次清晰；若注意一些语法错误，文章会更漂亮；作者能较恰当使用丰富词汇，在高级词汇方面希望能更熟练一些
There are lots of possibilities in life. At the some time, there are lots of accidents. In order avoid losing everthing when the accident happen, people have better not put all eggs in one basket. For college students, they should aim at all-round development rather than only focus their attention on one thing--only learning the knowledge about the professional course. For example, these students majoring in english can consider to acknowledge the second language, such as french, japanese, which can increase their competitive power. Similary, there are lots of students chose a second major to study. In that case, they will have more choice when thet graduate and find the job than those who only have one degree. At the some time, even if they do not chose the second major, they can learn more technical skills by trial and error--getting the national computer rank examination certification, reading books as many as possible of all kinds of fields. People should consider the possibilities may happen on matter in career age or study age and learn more skills and develop integrated.
