2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

从句数量偏少，且文中有几处句子错误；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨；请作者加强词汇表达的灵活性，但文中有较多拼写错误。

Computer is becoming more and more popular since it apperance. Now, more and more people are addicted in computer. they play games, reading E-book, get information and calcumulation. taking more times on the computer, man's brain seemly involution. some people think comouter promot the hunman being's progress, computer makes caculation easier,make massage spreads fast and so on; other people think conputer take more problems for man, for example, the dlight of man's sightlent has much relationships, fat diease and cervical spondylosis . in my opinon, we should use computer resonablly. we can play games some time, but most time should use for search useful information, in addtion,we should have ten minutes' relax when we face computer one hour.