高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用高级词汇就更好了；不能熟练使用过渡词，文章结构欠佳。

My favorite sport Everyone has a hobby. My hobby is to play football. This is my favorite sport. I think that playing football is very interesting. I like football that I had an experience. One day, on my way to my home, I picked up a football by chance. I was so happy that I played soccer with my classmates. Finally, I fell in love with playing soccer. These days, I often play competitions about the football and train with my friends. I think that it is fun for me to play soccer with them. I love Bei ke han mu, a football star. He comes from England. I want to become a professional football player like him.