作者词汇表达较为熟练,高级词汇使用不是很多;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;不能熟练使用过渡词,基本没有衔接词。
My favorite sport Everyone has a hobby. My hobby is to play football. This is my favorite sport. I think that playing football is very interesting. I like football that I had an experience. One day, on my way to my home, I picked up a football by chance. I was so happy that I played soccer with my classmates. Anyway, I fell in love with playing soccer. These days, I often play competitions about the football and train with my friends. I think that it is fun for me to play soccer with them. I love Bei ke han mu, a football star. He comes from England. I want to become a professional football player like him.