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这是一份简历。和求职信类似,简历一般包括个人情况,教育背景,个人能力,目标职业等信息。在写简历时,一定要实事求是,不可夸大其词,要特别注意突出自己符合招聘信息的能力。另外,还要注意简历的格式和语言,格式要整齐明了,语言要简洁有力。
请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度;请注意积累词汇量;文章层次较为清晰;能够使用一些简单的从句;请注意分段。
Resume My name is Li Ming,male,was birth in JUNE,15th,1986,unmarried.My hobbies are to play basketball, sing songs and watch movies. I was graduated in the English major of The North university In JULY,2008,I was very excellent in listening,speaking,reading,writing ,all of the subjects in my major are also good;at the same time ,Germany is my second major,it is no problem to communicate with others.In addition,I knew the process of foreign trade.So ,my job objective is foreign trade clerk.Hope can get the chance of interviewing and become a member in the company. job seekers:Li Ming Job objective _______________________________________ Education background ______________________________________ Personal skills _______________________________________ Hobbies _______________________________________