作者高级词汇使用较丰富,但词汇量偏少,有些单词拼错了;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用;注意句式在文中的变化,加强一些从句的使用,文章会更棒。
The disposal bags has been widely used in the past. Although it's convenience , also it bring so much peoplem to us. The disposal bags is polluting our environment, bucause the meterial of disposal bags is nondegradable. It will accumulate in the environment and then destroy our world. The government has imposed limitation on the use of disposal bags. It's can potect our environment efficiently. Also it can save money for people to buy the disposal bags.