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The disposal bags have widely used in the past. Although it's convenience , also it bring so much proplem to us. The disposal bags is polluting our environment, because the meterial of disposal bags is nondegradable. It will accumulate in the environment and then destroy our world. The government has imposed limitation on the use of disposal bags. It can potect our environment efficiently. Also it can save money for people to buy the disposal bags.