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使用了部分简单的长难句，可适当增加一些复杂的长句；文中词汇表达灵活多样，也能较丰富地使用高级词汇；有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分。
I Have two dreams The first year of college left me silently, and it comes to me that I'm a sophomore now. Without a career goal, I lacked direction and motivation, so the chances for me to do something eluded me. Hence I make up my mind to have a change. First of all, the most important task for me now is to have my grades improved. So I make some schedules which tells me what i should do in my spare time. For example, I'm ought to go to the library to do my grammer assignments and read some relevant books at 6:40 pm till 9:30 pm every monday. Or I should get up early to listen to the English tapes and to have my listening homeworks done at 7:00 am every Tuesday, and so on. I do believe that my scores are going to be improved. and ultimately I will graduate from my college with high marks, so I am going to be hired as an excellent English teacher by the most prestigious high school in my hometown. Secondly, I will have an boyfriend, who have an average-looking but love me deeply and have a medium height. As we get to know well about each other, we will get married and spend the rest time of our lives with each other and get older together. we will have our own lovely and healthy baby, and devote ourselves to raise and teach them untill the last day of our lives. I have two common but significant dreams.
