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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12908
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


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文章在句法方面做的很棒,从句和复杂句的使用不错;文章结构严谨,有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分;文中词汇表达丰富度不足,一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活。

用户练习作文:

As is clearly depicted from a cartoon that the parents need to use the Internet to talk to their kid. And we can find that the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate is so serious that it is high time we pay attention to it. Recently, people are excessively dependent on the Internet to communicate with others. Some people even prefer to talk on line rather than communicate face to face. What's worse, because the increasing use of the Internet, the relationship between us may be worse and worse. Even though more and more people use the Internet to communicate with others, the electronic communication can never replace face-to-face contact. Because when talking to others, we can hear their voices, see their expressions, and even hold their hands if we woul like to. But if we talk on line we can never do that. So I don't think electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact.

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