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采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练，单词拼写方面要更仔细。
It is a universilly acknowledged that diffculties would company you during the long-course of your life.But the life-favor people would let the life be more meaningful.Just as the old saying goes:the great use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it . I always hold the idea that do the things which as you think meaningful and don't be scared by the frustrations.For instance,if you were a student whose major is chemistry.It would be better for you and the whole society that you would choose to be a environment protector rather than a weapon specialist.For one reason,mostly people do the bad things to the society or countryland just for money.And it has nonsense that someone killing people just for fun.For another,anyone want no regreat when they were old and it would be a great thing hearing the appreciation rather than complainment or even scold. May the best bless for your life is that your life would be full of moving,appreciation,and other beatuiful things.just cherish the life just for the reason that it is most beautiful things the God gives to us.
