2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

文中应增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用；作者高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间，词汇表达灵活性也要提高，单词拼写错误较多。

The way to success It is universelly acknowledged that the target of what we are doing is vertical to the whole process.We can read a lot similar things through whatever book we can find.However,many people negelect the importance of the course of what we doing now,which influent the reslut a lot ,either.I would talk about this topic next simply. The reason that i keep an eye on the way is that it depends on the attitude we regard the world or other stuff.If you be more patient and paying more enthuisam duing the course,you would find more interesting and meaningful things .So,selecting a proper way is vital to you studying,life and other things else.What's more,you would find more mngeaningfu things waiting for way on your way to success. Please be more careful when you start one thing and have a thoughtful thought before you do it.Additionly,only in this way can you make up a more perfect life story.