语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用;作者平时练习中应扩充词汇量,注意几处拼写错误。
With the society rapidly developing, we could get more and more information, and also we commuicate with each other by Internet that is pretty convennient for us. However, there are many question when we use Internet to communicate. As reason as follow. There are many people prefer to communicate with other mankind by using computer rather than face to face or write letter. Because they are able to closely communicate and keep content by the Internet.Although is it very convennient, also they don't think so. It is very important for them to keep content by face to face. No matter what way we choose, we'd communicate and keep content with other people. In my opinion, we should follow the technologe and positively use Internet communicational tools, such as Wechat, Weiblog and QQ. Meanwhile, we should keep content with other mankind by face to face. In a word, we should use Internet tool and traditional method.
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