2011年专四作文真题:私家车是否应该交污染税

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文中能使用多样的词汇表达，也能较好的使用一些高级词汇；文章层次较为清晰。

Spend or Save The problem of spending vs.saving has now been in the limelight.Opinions vary widely.Some people think it wise to consume in advance,The other people,however,counter by saying that saving for tommorow gives them a sense of security.For my part,I prefer to take the model of latter ones. To begin with,saving has often been used as a symbol of virtue.With the development of society,excessive consumption has enjoyed great popularity among different people.About 60% of people in the world choose to consume in advance.In fact,it is excessive consumption that contributes people to forming a habit of wasting.Be rich or poor,saving should be a responsibility for everyone. Then,saving brings people a sense of security in the event of accident.With rare exception,there is risk to excessive consumption.Put the problem aside that is people have enough money to repay a debt,it is threating when people need an amount of money anxiously.What's more,being heavily in debt people tend to be burdened with the high interests. To summarize,saving for tommorw is a favorable way for us to pursue.People can enjoy the benefits of saving in various walks of life.