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2005年1月英语六级作文真题:对病人进行捐助

发布时间:2013-05-14 23:09浏览次数:776
要求:

希望社会对这个病人进行捐助,这个病人是个学生

 1.对病人的简单介绍:目前的病情和家庭情况 

 2.目前的困难:无法继续承担医疗费用,需要护理 
 3.希望捐助,联系方式 
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作者词汇表达较为熟练,高级词汇使用不是很多;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;文中衔接词丰富。

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The world we live in is beautiful, and we are lucky because we have the ability to see, to hear, to talk and to walk, we can enjoy the happiness in the world. But unfortunately, some people can not. There are also a lot of disabled people. Here are some things we can do to help them enjoy the world better. First, we should stop ignoring the importance of the sidewalk for the blind. I have seen blind sidewalk occupied by car, trees or other things. People didn't even realized that blind people may bump into those things which should not appear in the blind sidewalk. We should move away those things to make a safe sidewalk for blind. Second, be more patient about the disabled people. There are special seats for the old, weak, and the disabled people in every bus. But sometimes, it's not easy for disabled people to get on the bus. The bus drivers and passengers are always showing their impatience to disabled people, and that really hurts. Third, don't look down upon disabled people and don't make indiscreet remarks on them. They may be disabled in some parts, but they are actually just the same with all of us, they don't want to be looked as a freak which they are not. To help the disabled people, we must keep in mind that humans are equal, the disabled people also have the right to enjoy the beauty of the world. So, let's do our best to make a better world for them.

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