2013年5月11日雅思大作文真题:生活质量下降的原因和解决方案

文中词汇使用灵活，可是在高级词汇的积累上还要再接再厉；文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用；行文较为流畅，作者文中过渡词使用的不错。

Ironically enough, there is a increasing development with modern technology while not in consistent with the improving living quality. Now, The human being are unvoluntarily subject to a varity of pollutions and problems. Most of them are alway in low spirit towards life-on energy to keep things fresh and to keep learning, and people are no longer content with being fed and clothed adequately. They are more concerned about how to enhance their sense of happiness and quality of their life. It is well known that there is a decline of the quality of life in the number of cases relating to sordid environment, incessant healthy problems , the pressure of business and so on. As the world is getting more densely populated, pollution presents a severe problem. More people make more waste. All this waste is polluting our surroundings. Pollution has a bad influence on our life.The air is pollnted by the smoke and fog coming out of the factory chimneys. Plants die for want of fresh air. The river is polluted and the fish are unfit to live. There is noise pollution made by cars and factories, etc, which hurts the capacity of hearing.Besides, unsafe food oil and vegetables involuntarily make negative effects on our health. Over - eating will help us pile on the pounds but it also comes with other health warnings. More and more unknown diseases are bringing up as mushrooms without new effective treatment. Neither do well in our material lifes-bare necessities of life-bread and butter, air and water, nor our spiritual life are colorful and various. We face pressure coming from many factors of life such as house ,work,money and so on. How can we make an effective and quick stop to these unexpected matters, receiving a high living quality? It is high time to plant more trees to keep the air fresh to purify the water to make use of the wastes and to turn harm into good.What's more, it's vital to maintain a good state of mindwe and do aerobic exercise at least twice a week. There must be a balanced diet and ensure that not less than 8 hours of sleep a day. Insofar as we can enhance our quality of life and get a sense of happiness.