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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:11浏览次数:10404
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题目:It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket.把全部鸡蛋放到一个篮子里是不明智的。
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采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;文章能较灵活地使用部分高级词汇,但词汇表达丰富度不足;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误。

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As is konwn to all, it it not wise to put all eggs in one basket. The reason is so obvious that such behavior is at great risk. Once you knock down the basket, all the eggs are broken. It is the same to business or investment. For doing business or investment have some risks, if you put all your capitals in that, business failing, you will earn nothing and lose everything. Thus , the wise practice is to put all eggs in different baskets, although each basket is possible to be knocked down. There is few chance that all basket are knockes down in the same time. So this allocation of eggs is more reliable and you will feel at ease. Only in this way can you make the right choice.

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