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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:11浏览次数:10397
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题目:It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket.把全部鸡蛋放到一个篮子里是不明智的。
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采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文中用词稍显贫乏,请多使用高级词汇。

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It is known to all that it is not wise to put all eggs in one basket. It is obvious that putting all eggs in one basket is at great risk. Once you knock down the basket, all the eggs are broken. It is the same to business or investment. For doing business or investment takes some risks, if you put all your possession in that, business failing, you will earn nothing and lose everything. Thus , the wise practice is to put all eggs in different baskets, although each basket is possible to be knocked down. There is few chance that all baskest are knocked down in the same time. So this allocation way of eggs is more reliable and you will feel at ease. Only in this way can you make the right choice.

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