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It is known to all that it is not wise to put all eggs in one basket. It is obvious that putting all eggs in one basket is at great risk. Once you knock down the basket, all the eggs are broken. It is the same to business or investment. For doing business or investment takes some risks, if you put all your possession in that, business failing, you will earn nothing and lose everything. Thus , the wise practice is to put all eggs in different baskets, although each basket is possible to be knocked down. There is few chance that all baskest are knocked down in the same time. So this allocation way of eggs is more reliable and you will feel at ease. Only in this way can you make the right choice.