2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。

Nowadays the phenomenon of excessive packaging has become extremely terrible.Excessive packaging means the products or companies are over packaged,far more than exactly they need.It also means wasting time and labor,as well as the resources. There are many reasons which would lead to excessive packaging.For good looking and to increase the sales rate,but the last and the most important reason is that people want to make more money,and to get the biggest profit. I disagree with this.And I think all of the resources should be used reasonably.On the one hand, we can pay more attention to improving the quality instead of packaging excessively.On the other hand,good quality is the key to increasing the sales rate and be more competitive in the market.