2002年1月英语四级作文真题:就本校食堂的状况给校长写一封信

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；可增加从句和复杂句的使用；文中有几处拼写错误，应增加高级词汇的使用。

June 16 2016 Dear University president my name is Xiao Ming who comes from 'Ji Xing' class 1433 ,i want to explain something about our canteen. A wise man said 'food is the paramount necessity of people ' therefor i very concern about wether the food in canteen is nutrition and clean . luckly our canteen not only provides various meat but also vegetable every day ,the environment in canteen is very well, by the way,sometimes they taste not good and are not ripe yet. there are some bad aspects which is wasting in our canteen ,this is a serious problem and the situation has been becoming more and more popular,I don't see many students eat all their food, this is why we waste lots food everyday so i propose what our students eat food which they need, then we can avoid unnecessary waste, there has been a problem that the price is too high.