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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17585
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分54.5分
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行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用;作者能词汇表达较准确熟练,但请仔细检查词汇的拼写。

用户练习作文:

i am certain to agree with the statement.we cannot figure out the true situation unless we learn th whole thing as much as possible.it is not right to judge a man to ge a good guy or a bad one with the first glimps . we get to know a person with a long period.let me give eample,when you see a wife shouting at her husband.the first thought that cmoes to your mind is this wife is disbehaving.However,after you know the whole thing,you may understand her because her husband is cheating on her.So,it is not wise to judge a man or a thing easily by few evidence.

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