文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,高级词汇使用稍显不足;若增加一些复杂句的使用,文章会更棒;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳。
I'm glad to know that a foreign friend of my going to visit my hometown.I consider carefully,I would like to take her to visit local history museum which she must be interested in it. The history of China is borad and profound.when we come to foreign visitor,visiting history museum of China could learn how silk was made , what kind of pottery Chinese people used to keep or how to plant the tea in China.Let she know five hundreds history culture of China is not langdexuming. To make things better,it is highly recommended that myself should prepared ahead of time, in order to easily answer questions of foreign friend.Do not lose the etiquette of the host.