文中从句较为丰富,但有几处句子错误需要注意一下;文章词汇表达比较丰富,但高级词汇稍显欠缺,此外拼写检查要重视;文章层次较为清晰。
I'm glad to know that a foreign friend of my going to visit my hometown.I consider carefully and I would like to take her to visit local history museum which she must be interested in it. The history of China is extensive and profound.when we come to foreign visitor,visiting history museum of China could learn how silk was made , what kind of pottery Chinese people used to keep or how the tea is plantted in China.Let she know five hundreds history culture of Chinais not langdexuming. To make things better,it is highly recommended that myself should prepared ahead of time,in order to easily answer questions of foreign friend.Do not lose the etiquette of the host.