2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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I'm glad to know that a foreign friend of my going to visit my hometown.I consider carefully and I would like to take her to visit local history museum which she must be interested in it. The history of China is extensive and profound.when we come to foreign visitor,visiting history museum of China could learn how silk was made , what kind of pottery Chinese people used to keep or how to plant the tea in China.Let her know five hundreds history culture of Chinais not langdexuming. To make things better,it is highly recommended that myself should prepared ahead of time,in order to easily answer questions of foreign friend.Do not lose the etiquette of the host.