作者词汇表达较为熟练,高级词汇使用不是很多;文中的句子基本没有错误,可适当将文中短句合并为长句;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳。
I'm glad to know that a foreign friend of my going to visit my hometown.I consider carefully and I would like to take her to visit local history museum which she must be interested in it. The history of China is extensive and profound.When we come to foreign visitor,visiting history museum of China could learn how silk was made , what kind of pottery Chinese people used to keep or how to plant the tea in China.Let her know five-thousand-year history culture of Chinais not have unearned reputation. To make things better,it is highly recommended that myself should prepared ahead of time,in order to easily answer questions of foreign friend.Do not lose the etiquette of the host.