作者词汇表达较为熟练,高级词汇使用不是很多;适当增加一些复杂句的使用,文章会更棒;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。
I'm glad to know that a foreign friend of my going to visit my hometown.I consider carefully and I would like to take her to visit local history museum which she must be interested in it. The history of China is extensive and profound.When we come to foreign visitor,visiting history museum of China could learn how silk was made , what kind of pottery Chinese people used to keep or how to plant the tea in China.Let her know five-thousand-year history culture of China is not has unearned reputation. To make things better,it is highly recommended that myself should prepared ahead of time,in order to easily answer questions of foreign friend.Do not lose the etiquette of the host.