2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

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It is unwise to pull all eggs in one basket It is universally acknowledged for all fund managers that it is unwise to pull all eggs in one basket.However ,it is indeed for ordinary person enven not for finacial affiors Smart people would be intelligent enough to know that they would reduce risk to largest extent. I would like to give a example for upon point.When I was a little child I don't know how to use things effectivly.So,when I attended the junior examiantion of language,I brought all of pencils to take the exam.Unfornately,I lost my pencil box and then I could't attend the next exam.What's more ,my parents were all on work and no body could buy me some pencil.At last I cried so hardly that my teacher came to me and helped me .Therefore,I learned a unforgetable lesson from that event and try to change my habbit to make things better. I propose that everybody should have this thought .Only in this way can you make your facing risk become the littlest.In additon,on the other hand ,this habbit make you become a perfect person.