高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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In my hometown,It has been great changed. In the past, there were plants around the town.The river was so clean that fishes swam up and down. Although people were poor,they lived happily and comfortably life. At present, buildings and factories are full of the whole town. In the whole town, you can see the cars which are light or heavy any where. Factories development make town environment worse and worse. Because of the bad environment, life disappeared. In my opinion,we should try our best to protect environment, making the town more and more beautiful.