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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17590
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分86.5分
评语:

文章用词灵活多样,高级词汇使用也比较准确;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词;若注意一些语法错误,文章会更漂亮。

用户练习作文:

As is vividly portrayed in the depiction,a teacher asks a question about “2 2=?”for her student.Instead of a direct answer,a student responds that I am going to teach support.Actually,recent years have witnessed an increasing trend of students’ reliance on high-tech like computer,which is responsible for lacking of the ability to consider independently. When it comes to significance,nothing can touch education.Admittedly,an advanced technology will contribute definitely to enhance the level of education.Because if students especially for lacking of self-control is addicted to technology like computer,they may lose their ability of consideration by themselves and do it as technology whether its right or wrong.Someday,we may make a great mistake by following it.Therefore,to motivate students’ creation and flexibility,I think,the most important is to teach them how to consider carefully by themselves and overcome all difficulties and set-backs that life brings in person. According the discussion above,I draw a conclusion that only when we are fully aware of technological strengths and weaknesses, will we enable our education to advance at a faster pace.

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