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It is a currently highlighted topic that what is the real happiness.However,I should be the person full of experience about this controversial topic.Just as the old saying goes:happiness is not the absence of problems,but the ability to deal with them.Now,I will illustrate this point next simply. I am my parents' youngest child and I have one big sister and one big brother who always take care of me whole-heartedly.At a result , I have two mothers and two fathers and don't worry about all the tough problems about my life,because there always be someone doing it for me.Unfortunately,I didn't know what I want and how to deal with the personal affairs when I came to the university living with new classmates.Then,I became to be scary when some new changes happened to me.What's more,I became a more sensitive people.The luck always come to you with someone's encourgement and your endavor for life.At last, I become a intelligent and energetically smart person. Thanks for that tough time,which made me a better person.I Would have a sense of satisfaction at the moment I solved a problem.In addition,you would be more proudly and get an eager result when you make complex things be more simple .Only in this way can you get both happiness and self-confidence.
