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小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:36浏览次数:36965
要求:
用英文描述下自己的好朋友。
用户的作文(系统评分70.0分
评语:

句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;文中词汇使用较丰富,高级词汇使用要加强;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。

用户练习作文:

I have a closed friend, who is a lady. We have known each other since 18 years ago when we began working after graduation. Our dispositions are quite different, even some times we had quarrel for a small case.But all along, we kept a closed relationship, just like a family. 10 years ago, I moved to Beijing from my hometown, very soon, she and her husband came here too. Then I bought the apartment, very soon, they also bought their apartment in my house estate. Was it pure coincident? I have no answer. Few years ago, I sold my apartment, moved to a bigger apartment, this year, hers was sold too. She gave me a lot of help, we knew well each oter, to share our secret, our sadness and happiness. She said often, Did I own you a big favor lifetime ago? I laughed and said, yes, you did.

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