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山东临沂市临沭县2013届高三下学期模拟试卷英语作文

发布时间:2013-05-15 10:30浏览次数:1173
要求:

如何利用课间10分钟?有些高中学生课间依旧在教室认真学习(如图1),也有些高中学生走出教室积极活动(如图2)。请根据下面两幅图片用英文写一篇短文。你的短文应包含以下内容:
1. 简要描述图片;
2. 结合自身实际,谈谈你的感想: 你更喜欢哪一种方式?简述理由(至少两点)。

图1:


图2:


 

注意:

1. 对所给要点逐一陈述,适当发挥,不要简单翻译。
2. 词数120左右。开头已经写好,不计入总词数。
Breaks between classes are intended to give students a short time to be refreshed in body and
mind so that they can go on with their learning energetically and efficiently. Students in class
are usually looking forward to the break.

用户的作文(系统评分77.5分
评语:

拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;作者句法很棒,合理使用了复杂句;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅。

用户练习作文:

As is shown in the picture,some students prefer to focus on study ,while some others tend to do some sports activities to relax themselves. As for me,I have a preference for the latter for the simple reason that so much time has been spent on study that breaks between classes have to be taken advantage of to relax our mind and body.What's more,study during breaks is not efficient in the long run for we can't concentrate on study all the time.What matters most is that study and rest should be combined appropriately. As an old saying goes,"Health comes first."Breaks between classes is essential to be used to work out so as to build up students' body.

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