2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文章用词灵活多样，高级词汇使用也比较准确；可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

With the remarkable improvement of people's living standards, the internet has drawn great public attention. Varieties of computers emerge in people's life include some rural areas. We can't simply label the computer's appeal as right or wrong, but explore it in depth. Every coin has two sides, the same as computer. On the one hang, computer is the product of techniques. For some young people, it plays an important role and functions in their life and work. For example, we can send message and letters to our friends, boss and relationships through E-mial instead of writing the traditional letters and we can never suffer from the pain of waiting. But on the other hand, a worrying problem has sprung up that the excessive using computer among teenagers has increased. Some adolescents are overuse computers, such as copying the answers for their homewore, being addicted to playing games online. All these have triggered the adverse consequences for their physical and mental health. To sum up, computer has already been an irresistable trend in our modern society. Though techniques have made our life more convenient and efficient, only using it appropriately and rationally can make our life more meaningful.