高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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My hometown When I was a children, my hometown in a town, and it's far away from the city, but it's beautiful. There are more trees, and the clear reiver is abundant in fish. There weren't any companies, therefore the economic wasn't very good. Our house was poor, and the street was narrow. Everybody worked harder, but couldn't earn more money. Nowadays, there are a little of buildings and some companies established, the economic accelerate develop and every family have their cars. The reasons lead to the enviorment badly. The trees and the fish disappeared. I think the most important problem is treat the pollution.