2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；作者能较灵活的使用词汇，可是单词拼写还需加强；文章结构欠严谨，基本没有衔接成分。

with the development of electrionic teclolege the computer become more and more popular in our life .we can use it do many things .even for some pelople who make living by computer,without it life can not continue. but some pelople don't think computer is nessivary to man's life. some pelople think comtuter is very inportant for their life .for example they use computer to comunicate .they can use computer to buy goods .also for many business man computer is nessivary . on the other one hanicald .some pelpole think computer have a lot of problem in the life .for example more and more young pepole use computer to play game .this would make their body not good .effect their relationship with others . in my opinion every coins has two side .computer is inportant for human's life .but we need to use computer do useful things.