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when it comes to my hometown,the beatufuil water and mountain are pride of mine .i was apperaite for when i was visited your country.this is a exciting new that you is going to visit my hometown. according to what is said above,iwhen you come here ,i will take you to taste many delisous food and place.the goes without saying that my hometown is famous of tranditonal custom.there are several reasons accounting for it. it is such a common thing nowadays that drunk beer.but few people perfer to drunk white spirit.the Maotai spirit have a great effect on Guizhou.people will drunk it when in ceremony.i ensure you will be fall in there.wait you.
