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文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词；作者应适量增加从句的使用量；文中拼写错误有点多了。
When you wait for the train at the subway station,it is a usual phenomenon that almost everybody is watch his or her smrt phone to check messages,surfe online,reply the call,etc.Apperently,we live in a information exploring age.However,as far as I concerned,I am a bit of this trendency.Just as the old saying goes:a wealth of information creats a poverty fo attention.I can't agree with that any more. Below are several reasons why information is not always a goog thing in the modern world.First and the foremost,we all have so limited energy that we can't deal with all of the information we know.What's more,more and more unreal information appear in our life,which have a big effect on our decison of our target we are pursuing hardly now.The last but not the least, when so much similar information overwhelming us ,we may be confused and can't have a good choose and lose our guidence resultly. How fortunatly you are if you have recognized this question.We just adhere to both our heart and our target and then make a good choose among the information sea.You would be the one who can use the characteristic of this information age more effectivly and efficiently.Only in this way can you take the biggest adavantage of the information exploration .
