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When you wait for the train at the subway station,it is a usual phenomenon that almost everybody is watching his or her smrt phone to check messages,surf online,reply the call,etc.Apperently,we live in a information exploring age.However,as far as I concerned,I am a bit of worrying about this tendency.Just as the old saying goes:a wealth of information creates a poverty fo attention.I can't agree with that any more. Belows are several reasons why information is not always a goog thing in the modern world.First and the foremost,we all have so limited energy that we can't deal with all of the information we know.What's more,more and more unreal information appears in our life,which has a big effect on our decison of our target we are pursuing hardly now.The last but not least, when so much similar information overwhelming us ,we may be confused and can't have a good choose and lose our guidance resultly. How fortunatly you are if you have recognized this question.We just adhere to both our heart and our target and then make a good choose among the information sea.You would be the one who can use the characteristic of this information age more effectively and efficiently.Only in this way can you take the biggest advantage of this information exploration .