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Spend life for something that will outlast it It is universally acknowledged that life is so short,therefore,we are supposed to do something meaningful to payback our society and family. Firstly,the meaning of life is contribution.If I don't do contribution to our family or society,I will feel disappointed to our life.In addition,the meaning of life is to be patient to someone who need me to help.What's more,the meaning of life is to pay attention to our work. I will go to primary school to teach students as a volenteer .The primary students is far away from the big cities need my help.Besides,I will go to hospital to visit the patient who don't have children.I will take care them and listen their stories patiently.Last but not least,I will pay attention to my work as a good student. Spend life for something that will outlast it,and then I will find the meaning of life.
