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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):有意义的生活

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:13浏览次数:9025
要求:
Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark "The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it." You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you will do to make your life more meaningful. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
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拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;全文结构较为严谨。

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Spend life for something that will outlast it It is universally acknowledged that life is so short, therefore,we are supposed to do something meaningful to payback our society and family. Firstly,the meaning of life is to contribute. If I don' t make contributions to our family or society, I will feel disappointed with our life. In addition,the meaning of life is to be patient to someone who need me to help.What's more, the meaning of life is to pay attention to our work. I will go to primary school to teach students as a volunteer. The primary students far away from the big cities need my help. Besides,I will go to hospital to visit the patient who don' t have children. I will take care them and listen their stories patiently. Last but not least,I will pay attention to my work as a good student. Spend life for something that will outlast it,and then I will find the meaning of life.

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