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TV, a good thing or a bad thing As an important invention in the recent one hundred years, television has been providing people entertainment and up-to-date news and information in leisure time. However, debate on whether TV does good or bad thing to people is hotly going on, which is surely a controversial problem. Those positive hold the idea that television occupies an irreplaceable place in our daily life. Worldwide news, advertisement of newly products and all kinds programs that fit everyone are easily been received once we press the button down, which bring our life great conveniences. We can easily find what we want or need with the ads on the television. At the same time, television also plays the role of promoting communication between family members as well as enhancing sentiment of each other. Sitting on a sofa together after dinner, families chat or just express comments on a talk show. Bond of love between family members is formed silently. Meanwhile, those who believe that television is playing a zombie in our life argue that television brings more harm than good, especially for juveniles. Nowadays adolescents spend too much time watching television or surfing the internet while finishing their study tasks in a bad quality. Besides, advertisement on TV can easily mislead consumers for they only provide part of the information of the products. From my perspective, television brings people happy memory of their childhood and also provides people with conveniences. In this case, television cannot be objected abruptly.
