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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):信息爆炸

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:09浏览次数:5749
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Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay about the impact of the information explosion by referring to the saying "A wealth of information creates a poverty of attention. You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you can do to avoid being distracted by irrelevant information. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
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作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;文章结构严谨,有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分;文中词汇表达灵活多样,也能较熟练地使用一定的高级词汇。

用户练习作文:

When you are waiting for the train at the subway station,it is a usual phenomenon that almost everybody is watching his or her smart phone to check messages,surf online,reply the call,etc.Apperently,we live in an information exploring age.However,as far as I concerned,I am a bit of worrying about this tendency. Just as the old saying goes:a wealth of information creates a poverty fo attention.I can't agree with that any more. Belows are several reasons why information is not always a goog thing in the modern world.First and the foremost,we all have so limited energy that we can't deal with all of the information we know.What's more,more and more unreal information appears in our life,which has a big effect on our decison of our target we are pursuing hardly now.The last but not least, when so much similar information overwhelming us ,we may be confused and can't have a good choice and lose our paln resultly. How fortunatly you are if you have recognized this question.We just adhere to both our hearts and our target and then make a good choice among the information sea.You would be the one who can use the characteristic of this information age more effectively and efficiently.Only in this way can you take the biggest advantage of information exploration .

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