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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):信息爆炸

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:09浏览次数:5740
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Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay about the impact of the information explosion by referring to the saying "A wealth of information creates a poverty of attention. You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you can do to avoid being distracted by irrelevant information. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
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文中应增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨;文中词汇表达方面较丰富灵活,但在高级词汇的积累上还要再接再厉。

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Ways to get over information explosion Just as the old saying goes:a wealth of information creates a poverty of attention.Nowadays we are living in an era of information explosion.More and more people are complaining that they are lost in the information age. Admittedly,it is a fact that the information explosion has brought us so much convenience that allowed us to get a plenty of information just with a simple click sitting in front of the computer.Nevertheless,we are also distracted,upset,confused by an incredibly large quantity of information.For instance,when searching some information online,people are usually distracted by the appealing but irrelevant information and easily forget their original plan.What's more,sometimes these irrelevent information are useless and unreal.Therefore,it may be time-consuming and troublesome to search information online. Then what we can do to avoide being distracted by irrelevant and useless information?Here are some useful tips.Firstly, make a list to make sure what you want before you search.You can aviod some irrelevant,yet appealing information in this way .Secondly,you can find some credible and professional websites and then save and categorize them rightly.Only in this way can you leave some advertisement and useless information behind both effectively and efficiently.

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