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We've always heard that university is much different from high school,then, what's the value of university life? Well,obviously,it's not just about acquiring knowledge. The independence gained in college,the experiences of attending all kinds of activities and a good relationship with people is also the value of university life. Independence is impossible when we were in high school,because we were too young to be independent,and our parents knew that. So,even if we wanted to,we can't. But in university,we are older,and we have more free time. We can even have a part-time job if we like,that can make us more financially independent. The experiences of attending activities are also of great value. In university,there are a lot of activities held on campus,it's easy for us to take part in the activities we like. The experiences can help us know ourselves better and improve ourselves. Some experiences can even help us in finding jobs. Having a good relationship with others is also one of the values of university life. Friendship in college sometimes can be a life-long friendship. People in college are not like in middle school or high school,they are more mature. So when they want to start a friendship with us,they mean it. And in my opinion,it's necessary for us to have at least a few close friends in our life. The value of university life is great,and what we should do is to take good use of it. Do not waste it.
