2015年高考作文优秀范文：登山活动

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Hey, everyone! I am the reporter of English newspaper in our school. Recently, Xing Guang High school holded a mountain climbing activitity in Daqing Mountain, and the specific date is on 10th April. On that day, all the students queued up and waited at the gate of school, then the school bus took studnets to the foot of Daqing Mounatin. Studnets cilmbed the mounatin with teacher together as each class have a teacher who was accompanied with them. Sometimes, when a few studnets felt tired and wanted to give up, other classmates encouraged them to keep on going. After two hours, all the students climbed the peak of mounatin. Then they appriciate the beautiful scenery from the peak of the mountain and some students have prepared performance. Finally, all the students seemed to have a good time and went home. In my opinion, it is very nice to have such kind of activitiy because it can promote studnets relationships between each other, which can be helpful in their study and classroom interaction. Besides, climbing mountain is good for studnets to improve their physical condition. Wish our school would have more beneficial activities!